I Make Believe

I’ll take no hesitations

In this world that is ever changing

I’ll keep my head held up high.

 

And in my dreams I’ll have no indecisions

Because, you see, in this life that is the impossible.

I’ll keep on moving through anything that comes my way.

 

I wish I could pretend to live out my dreams.

But make-believe is no fulfillment

To what I wish I could believe in.

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Nice Poem. I like the contrast between what is ideal and what is reality.
I also liked the way you got lost in the dreams, but you found reality more
rewarding. There is wisdom in the words. You have a lesson to teach, but
you do so in a way that tricks the reader into not knowing they are learning
philosophy. Nice!

[Dillon Cotter]

I always stay on the road of my dream. It tends to keep us focused and motivated to be successful. Just for that moment in time. The happiness. Very good.

-Will

[Hippy]

i love your colorful wordery

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is very good. The logic of the words in the poem is excellent. Dreams sometime can disappoint us. Better to stay focus and do what is needed. Need to hold on to dreams and hope with luck something may come to a life. Ending was perfect. A direct and to the point poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Jessica]

This is really really good Rachael. I love the choice of words toy have chosen. Very powerful. Especially the last 3 lines. This is greay. Keep it up. I see great talent in you.