June

Haven't written in a while. Please let me know what you think.

I want to see the stars in a whole new light;

the air so thick yet they shine so brightly.

To illuminate the world like once before and drench it with hope.

Again shall they allow us to see more than what is on the surface

by hiding what should not be seen

and highlighting what simply is not.

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

This in an amazingly deep and thought provoking piece! For it's length it carries a huge amount of energy with it and leaves the reader pondering the stars and how life, the universe and everything functions. The last two lines are my favorite. They are the lines that pulled my mind out of the ordinary and placed it into the extraordinary levels of pondering. A fantastic creative weave of thought, insight and vision.

Great Ink!
Wolfie

[Deepshikha]

I love it! As always. :D

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Simple, mystic and refreshing to read, well done.