It was for you

Do drop your reviews

I don’t know how I feel,
That is what I gotta deal with,
Your pictures, those picture,
I admit I like to see them
And that’s how I can miss you.
Every time I try to forget you,
I end up with new ways to miss you.
Yeah that’s how my years went,
Finding new ways to forget.
I know you would call me silly,
Only if you knew.
Whatever I wrote,
It was for you.
What I liked were the words you sent,
Some good, some bad
But all were the same.
I admit I read’em all,
Atleast one day a week.
Me! A good reader I say,
Still obsessed with your write,
But baby I wouldn’t write,
Only if I knew,
It was for you.

Reviews

[Lexi]

I get a clear picture of want for a person, consciously and unconsiously. I think the poem should be broken into a few smaller stanzas to emphasize the point though. It would help to show the "if only I knew" change and make it distinct. Overall it was a good read and I enjoyed it.

[sabinn]

thank you very much i would fairly try to make a better version of "if only i knew" taking your good idea in accountance.

[CJScrawls]

The longing for this "you" is so clear and sound. I must say that you love her from within your soul.

[sabinn]

maybe i dont know mate.