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A Poem by Stephen

The sound of slurps
Piercing my ears
Bursting my eardrums
I hear no more

Cascading down
Waterfalls splashing
Against the rocks
The solidity of life

As I sit, weeping
I drink my smoothie
I hear
A slurping sound

© 2011 Stephen

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TheElfPrincess

A strange poem, not a thing people write about very quickly. But anyways, I like it. It's original and has a nice flow. Well done.

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Added on June 18, 2011
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Stephen

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I am an 18 year old guy from New Orleans, LA but I am currently in college at USM. I love writing depressing and dark poems. I love emo and gothic styles. One of my favorite things to do is smoke. I a.. more..