walking with fingers

it was a very odd night when i wrote that..

Ohh

this is the time when he drops his pen

on the girl he had scribbed

she is looking from behind

wanting to get out of there

 

The paper is a place to meet others

meet the others who can be your bees or knees

who can help you to get back up

 

She kicks the knees and paralyzes

she is walking her head with little fingers

the head and the fingers, they didn't damage

and those fingers will also open her teeth

and be the only way to get her to talk.

Author's Note

haha please correct my grammar or whatever if you see something wrong ! im here to learnnnn ;)

Reviews

[Legion]

What a strange but interesting piece. For some reason this reminds me of the Addam's Family. Click! Click! :)

[Lyndsay Castro]

I would say you need to tighten up your grammar, but your style leaves it so open and it gives it a fresh perspective on poetry. If you want to be grammatically correct, then you'd change it. But I like it exactly as it is! It's you, and that's what counts. Welcome to Writers Cafe!