Shoulder Pads

Blue viens hot blood

Pulsing through

left alone?

Dead computers

Not for long

Last hope of communication

Be very quick

Dashed against rocks

 

After a hard day

I'm done wishing

Things would be better

It's hard to say

I wish things will bet better

I love you

 

I'm tired of them

Getting worse

So simple

Is it so wrong?

I would think

It's not my choice to feel!

The words get stuck

It happens

In a persons throat

 

JUST STOP!

Hard to speak

I HATE YOU!

At least I think so

My mind does not belong to you!

 

Don't have the guts?

Let me think for myself

You'll get there soon

Maybe

Simply in

 

Midafternoon....

Author's Note

My friend Angie http://www.writerscafe.org/AngelPaige1994 and I wrote this poem together. We both wrote a poem and then intertwined them both together, just something we were experimenting with. She has another of these on her account check it out.

Reviews

[Marie Harrison]

Great job.

[Cynthia]

It's so nice to write with a friend!
OK, I do share poems with friend, but I actually neverr WRITE Poem with my friend, you have a great friend to write with!
I love this poem, and kinda understan dit. A Cool poetry!
Nice Written!

[Coyote Poetry]

The basic conversation of two young people. I have four children. I try not to read or understand their craziness. I like this conversation. Easy to understand. Just trying to conquer boredom.
Coyote

[HopelesslyDevoted]

haha, shoulder pads... we are so weird aren't we? i think it turned out pretty cool though i have to say. in case anyone is wonder, the other one we wrote together on my account is called Fear and Lemonade. go check it out and tell us what you think!

[Dark Empress]

Good poem, neat I like it.