Beautiful morning

After the stress of the day

The tears of pain

The heart ache of the week

 

Sleep consumed my heart

The soft night wind blows through my room

The soft moon light shimmers through the window

 

The feeling of safty takes over

Warmth

Comfort

Ease

 

And in the early morning

I am greeted by beauty

 

The leaves on the trees have changed color

The sky is a perfect shade of soft pink

The world is quiet

 

I can hear the soft sounds of birds outside

No one is awake quite yet

And the beauty of the morning is over whelming

 

No pain

No stress

No heart break

 

Only peace

And beauty

Of this beautiful morning

Author's Note

I went to sleep REALLY early last night and I am, not a morning person at ALL but because i slept soooooo long I woke up early right as the sun was coming up. I live in a small town and it is beautiful this time of year. And I was compleatly blown away by the beauty of this morning. Let me know what you thnk

Reviews

[Kandy]

I think the poem was wonderful. I finally found someone who shares the same gratitude for mornings. Mornings are a beautiful thing. There always like a new beginning. I think you couldn't have written it any better. The way you set up the poem described clearly the cycle of the day. We go to sleep heartbroken, but we awake new and refreshed to the sight of the sunrise. Great Job.

[Desert Dreamer]

A good reason to go to bed early more often so one can wake up with the sunrise. The sunrise is very refreshing, you have described a wonderful morning vision. Please note what I think is a spelling error in "The world is quite", I think you mean "quiet".

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great start to the day...

[Inci 2]

No pain

No stress

No heart break



"Only peace

And beauty

Of this beautiful morning "
ver soothing lines.. nice pom!!!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive poem. A quiet early morning can bring peace to the saddest heart. A very good ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Marie Harrison]

Very peaceful and beautiful poem to me. Seems to me that sleep served you well with this majestic poem!

[Sweets]

You're quite lucky to live in such place, and see the wonderful great nature :)
I loved this poem, it describes how much you treasure freedom :)
Great write !

[HopelesslyDevoted]

i love this sarah! its so refreshing to read a nice calm poem about the simple beauty of something we are blessed with every day! great peom!

[Dark Empress]

Amazing poem :) Beautifully written

[Ry]

Gorgeous gorgeous gorgeous poem. I love it with all of my heart. I have to wake up really early for school, and I then I have to walk there, and it is so beautiful watching the sun come up over the mountains =)
I totally can relate to this feeling, and you captured it perfectly. Good job! =)