Bravo! I was so drawn in by your poem, really you are an amazing poet! The way you capatilized certain words brought your point across so clearly, I could hear your pain, your anger. I am so taken away with your poem, thank you for sharing it...
you cast me .....
into the shadows .....
let me witness life's hollow
showed me you were shallow
This stanza really popped out at me, a wonderful read!
Bravo! I was so drawn in by your poem, really you are an amazing poet! The way you capatilized certain words brought your point across so clearly, I could hear your pain, your anger. I am so taken away with your poem, thank you for sharing it...
you cast me .....
into the shadows .....
let me witness life's hollow
showed me you were shallow
This stanza really popped out at me, a wonderful read!
hello my name is Matthew L. Arcelay ... i'm a poet mostly and i write under a few names
mostly as write from the spirit, but i also use others .....
guess i feel with each it gives me a different pe.. more..