Broken

You told me forever 

I told you never 

You were their 

While I was here 

You lied 

And so i cried 

My trust had been given 

Then returned 

Not touched 

Not opened 

Just broken 

Reviews

[opinionated]

I really like the poetic feel in it. I really get the story. nice job

[alex]

thank you for that usually I feel like my poems just depress and scar people so its nice to get a positive review