A heart not so strong

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Why is there a heart-break
Why there is a pain
Why is it, whatever I do
Goes away in vain..

It seemed all fine
I felt happiness was mine
Then suddenly what happened
With little miss sunshine..

Dark clouds all around
Peace is no where to be found
In and out side of me, I see
Fake life on ground..

Tears dry away one day
this pain, too will fade away
and maybe then I can begin again
some place where there is no night or day..

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Reviews

[Sagar Waingankar]

Nice write! As I read few months before from UNICEF, 'Green is a new black'! What I thought and always did was even a black could turn green again if we try till it can! New beginning do exist at an end! Cycle will continue till living beings stay! Take care!

[Sakshi]

I agree with you Sagar. There is always a new beginning , only we should have the passion and will to search/wait for it...

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

I like the words in this write you worked them nicely

[Sakshi]

thanks a ton :)

[Marie]

Oh...that poor little heart hiding in a corner...and all your happiness lost in falseness...perhaps you will find it again someday.

[Sakshi]

yup! a new beginning it is..

[Samantha Wilkey]

This is really good. I've read this one and many of your other writings. I like them all truth be told. You are a very good writer. :)

[Sakshi]

Thank you so much Samantha for having the patience to read my creation :) I am keen on growing myself as a writer on Writers Cafe!