~ no more love ~

 

Grass was green

Sky was blue

Sun was shining high
but still there was
a heart not happy
looking up in the sky...

That maple leaf
was like his life
broken down from the tree
now no life; 
now no joy; 
now remains no glee...

Leaf was green once
it was very happy
but now it has turned brown
and that joyous heart
also with his loss of love
slowly-slowly drowns...

Why did it happen, 
yells the innocent heart
who will answer me..?
Just like the leaf
flying across the sky
searching for another life, maybe…

But this leaf is
still unknown
what is coming ahead,
is it the garden,
full of roses or
is it thorns-full bed..?!?

For the leaf, journey has just
started; don’t end it like this
my dear!
But one may always think
what happened to the heart, 
O dear lord, I fear..!!

With the course of time, 
both found death
and thus ended their search, 
now no-more the love remains, 
and no tree
for the birds to perch..!!

 

Author's Note

Written in absolute hurry!
I don't think this is one of my best!

Reviews are welcome!!

Reviews

[Airafh]

to be frank enough ,, not so good as your other poems .. i have almost read all ur poems

[Sakshi]

I mentioned its not my best. Its not something I am proud of..
I had an idea, but not always one can express completely..
Thanks for reading though :)

[Cerise]

WOOOW..that was amazing,..if your write such an amazing poem in hurry what would you write if u had time..i loved the whole comparison..specially the end

[Sakshi]

thanks a lot fancifati for being so generous with your reviews :)

[Cerise]

no problem..:)

[Pratik]

An apt comparison! A broken heart and a fallen leaf! Loved the imagery! But you can improve this further! Good effort :)

[Sakshi]

Thanks aaran.
Even i thought i should improve this..! i dint put my 100% in it..

thanks for dropping by!

[Pratik]

You are welcome.. :)