*city of blinding lights*

won't be needed - READ ON

 

Take me to the city of blinding lights, where fireworks are all around,

no time to look at one another, loneliness is never found..

The lull of the heart would not be heard, cuz no time to count the heartbeats,

or to think of the things that one hides, the face that lies beneath..

 

Just walk on a crowded street, with strangers around in a foreign land,

where no one is there to give a shoulder, or comfort with a hold of hand..

Take me to the city of blinding lights, tears in my eyes would not be found,

no past no future will stop me, to just live in the present unbound..

Reviews

[Airafh]

Very well written. Especially
'no past no future will stop me, to just live in the present unbound..'

Nice

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Bombay perhaps...nyway nice poem

[Sakshi]

thank you!

[SHEEMA HUQ]

very good indeed, superb lyrics, structure, pace, well done!

[Sakshi]

thank you Sheema!
keep dropping by!

[Bell-lala]

This is definatly a city I would much rather go to, conserding how the majority of them is filled with robbers, drugs ect. It really is a cute poem.

[Sakshi]

Of everything I never thought someone would find the poem 'cute', but I like your perspective! Its good to know different angles!

Thanks for reading!

[Bell-lala]

No problem. haha and sorry I'm honestly just odd like that :)

[Lluvi]

Beautiful poem!

[Sakshi]

Thanks a ton for dropping by!

[J. Viands]

Well done you make me want to go there, every city I go to people are broke and gettin robbed doin all sorts of drugs… if there is a city like the one you talkin bout that’s where I’m goin you convinced me again well done

[Sakshi]

Thanks J.Viands!

[Tevin Smith]

yo that's ill girl please take me there i would really like to get away from this hectic life i'm living lol

[Sakshi]

hehehehe ;)

[Cerise]

ahhh wonderfully written..a way of escape from reality...to another place in dreamland..with no identity....no questions..no judgements..just yourself...very well written...:)

[Sakshi]

thanks for appreciating gal..! inspires me :)

[Pratik]

Good write... a take on the trials of the urban life... an escape route to a world that is without any expectations... It paints a dark and morbid picture.. nevertheless it conveys reality in a foreboding manner.. Nice read

[Sakshi]

thanks for reading Aaran!
and I have to agree, urban life is lifeless!