~The perfect gift~

The way you mend my heart

The way you wipe my tears

The way you always look in my eyes

And let me have no fears…

The way you hold me tight

The way you heal my soul

The way you take me in your arms

And make my happiness your goal..

Only if I could return those gestures

And forever be there to lift your spirits

I would feel blessed to be alive

And live this life as a beautiful gift…

Reviews

[Tevin Smith]

nice that surely is a perfect gift to know someone so talented can bless our hearts with such kindness in her words keep up the good work
Wiz kid

[Sakshi]

Thank you so much! Have a good day...

[B-poet]

Very inspirational and endearing. A picture is worth a thousand or more words in relation to your poem. Great job. :)

[Sakshi]

Thank you so much!! :)

[R.M. Duchene]

I'm reading some conflict in the "if only" line. I like the implications. Possibly the writer doesn't feel the same way, but wishes that he/she did.

[Sakshi]

I like your feedback. Thank you...

[afra]

awwww this is so cute ...i love it ...well done

[Sakshi]

*blush* thank you!

[Aehr]

This is very optimistic, and serene. I like the feel of the poem. good picture choice as well. I like the title.

[Sakshi]

thank you so much Rhea...

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and positive poetry. I like the hope and kindness in the words.
"I would feel blessed to be alive
And live this life as a beautiful gift…"
A wise person is thankful for the gift of love. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sakshi]

Thanks a lot for the appreciation Coyote.