Sometimes.......

Sometimes
Even in the midst of joy,
There is sadness…

Sometimes
Even below the crooked smile
there is a hurt heart…

Sometimes
It seems the whole world
Conspires against you…

Sometimes
It feels as if there is
Just no one…

Sometimes
Even among your close ones
You don’t find a well wisher…

Sometimes
Your mind & heart
Have a messy fight…

Sometimes
You feel everything is distorted
& you don’t feel alright…

Sometimes
The face of life seems so sad
& all your plans just turn bad…

Sometimes
Your headaches so hard
& there is no medicine near or far…

Sometimes
You have to be mute
Even when the words want to flow out…

Sometimes
You are asked to shut up
Even when you know your advice is the best…

Sometimes
You are neglected
Even though you feel your presence will make a difference…

Sometimes
Life becomes so tough that
You are tired to carry your own weight…

Sometimes
You let your tears fall down
Because the ink and paper are over!!

Reviews

[Trigorin]

Not bad. I think some of your language is a little overdone, but it still expresses the raw emotion which went into this piece. You have a good concept here and you execute it fairly well. Well done.

[Sakshi]

Thank you so much.. It would add to the feedback if you could explain "some of your language is a little overdone".. I would like to improve.. :)