Soul Embarked

When your world disappears in front of you
Going with the sands of your hour glass

I will be there

The sound of your soul leaving will leave a sound.
The same of all the angels singing with their harps


And shake my world to pieces

I will wonder forever until I find a light that shined just as bright as yours

 

Reviews

[A.A.Romanczuk]

How lovely! Complex in its very simplicity...a paradox, I know..but exactly what I think...I am led to believe You will understand...it touches the heart...how often do we love so deeply as to be thus shaken by the departure of the loved one whether physical or spiritual ....You create a magical, surreal atmosphere out of a most serious, real situation....
Undoubtedly well written...

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. you're becoming a maestro at these surreal love poems ... each one first melts and then crystallizes beautifully ... and oh the angels just made my day ... :) ...

[Citizen Erased]

This is truly magnificent! Definitely one of my favourite of yours! :)