Burn

Burn

A Book by Stars and Whales

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I love your imagination; you have interesting names for the characters. Although the numbers made me feel that they are all robots, which confused me a bit. >w>;; I do love your visual representation of the environment they are all living in. I also appreciate that each character in some way, have their own voice; which helps me abbreviate and understand them.

I hope you continue writing into this story, I loved it!

When you're free please feel free to review the rest of my chapters of my story. Reading your work is also helping me, thank you so much!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I love your imagination; you have interesting names for the characters. Although the numbers made me feel that they are all robots, which confused me a bit. >w>;; I do love your visual representation of the environment they are all living in. I also appreciate that each character in some way, have their own voice; which helps me abbreviate and understand them.

I hope you continue writing into this story, I loved it!

When you're free please feel free to review the rest of my chapters of my story. Reading your work is also helping me, thank you so much!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Middle Earth, The Shire



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"Even Darkness Must Pass. A new day will come, and when the sun shines, it will shine out the clearer." -Samwise Gamgee I love to write, and I hope to become a published writer some day. I ho.. more..