Dreams in the light

Dreams in the light            Sami Khalil

An English Sonnet…

 

These are the days when wrongs become so trite

When might makes right, detritus of “Evil”

My elation is that we cease all fight

And twist not justice to cause upheaval.

 

We have unpaid bills due to one another

A reminder that life carries those scars

Woven in its fabric all souls’ attire

Stitched of timeless “Love”, heartbeats of stars.

 

Who can brush off biggest lies that we tell

Fetching the truth in every thoughtful way

In us the worst enemies do dwell

Whose faces we seek in others’ long sway?

 

As the world spins out of our control

Outlive the day in good grace sans turmoil.

Reviews

[Buddhistboy73]

A poem that seems to speak of encouraging us all to get along together and set aside our issues and grievances which ultimately only cause more division in this world of ours...:)

Some good imagery and words here my WC friend...:)

In us the worst enemies do dwell
Outlive the day in good grace sans turmoil

Thanks for sharing..

BB73

[Sami Khalil]

Wowzy wood!
So true and well articulated dear poet and friend. You talk straight and with great conviction.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and blessings with us.

[Victor D. Lopez]

I wish all would read your words, reflect on them, and take your sage advice. Yours is a powerful voice and a wonderful ability to pack within the tight constraints of a sonnet volumes of meaning. Really, really well done!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! Coming from you sir is an honor. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and blessings with us.

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This is truly one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read. I am amazed. Each word has a different poem, each word seems to be filled with divine light. I deeply regret not having read these poems before, they seemed very heavy at the time, but I realized that this is real poetry.
The starting made such an impact that I am crushed under the evil. I felt like I was stuck between dreams and life in the poem, like I couldn't handle the weight of life and the real face of people and was holding on to dreams. I will put the last word to sleep in my arms.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! I love your take on this poem. I'm grateful to you and honored to know you.
Peace, love and harmony.

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Hearing these from you means a lot! Have the best weekend sir!

[An owl on the moon]

Your dreams are carried on such dark waters, longing for that light. There are times it seems our world in coming undone. May all we need to survive grow strong within us... around us.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! So true and well articulated poet; I can't agree more. Thank you kindly for sharing.

[Arundass TP]

Poem flows like a river. Good work.

[Sami Khalil]

Good Java to you. Thank you so much dear poet and friend for your wonderful review and sharing. See you soon.

[Pryde Foltz]

Each moment flows into the next; color the moment with grace and strength, there is a good chance the next moment will be colored the same.

[Sami Khalil]

Thank you so much dear poet and friend for your wonderful review and sharing.

[emmajoygreen]

Truth and loyalty, kindness and more is what makes life manage the pain for and of many each and every day. Evil and lies strike the bell for the hordes who think they can escape dark isolation. 'We have unpaid bills due to one another - A reminder that life carries those scars' Powerful words, Sami..

[Sami Khalil]

OMG! So true and well articulated dear poet and friend. You have summed it up marvelously. Thank you so much for your wonderful review and sharing.

[emmajoygreen]

Sami, if I try hard, can be quite bright sometimes!! :)

[Sami Khalil]

Hehehe. You sure are or can. Thank you again.

[Thomas W Case]

Beautiful work. Powerful and poignant.

[Sami Khalil]

Woozy woo
Thank you kindly for sharing your thoughts and for the welcomed visit.

[MCS]

We all need more light to dream and create a better world.

[Sami Khalil]

We sure do dear poet and friend. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts on this.

[Pete]

"let there be peace and let it begin with me". strength and courage lie in our own admissions and abilities to forgive, not revenge and payback. perhaps this ill world needs more mirrors.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! I love how you summed it up marvelously. Thank you so much dear poet and friend for your input and wisdom. Gracie mille.