Still be artsy

Still be artsy    by Sami Khalil

An English sonnet…

Livens the room when she does come hither

When hearts quiver and toothy grins light up

Topsy Turvey and silk-lined hopes dither

For a moment, void shrinks the turf and cup.

 

I spy courtships ensue terra firma

Even pausing ravens and crows to hear

Abandoned confessions burgle plethora

Of silences awed and betides steer.

 

Faintly, I see the dashing figure off

The map or dreams as my words do tremble

In stared revolts and comprehensions’ scoff

The ephemeral and scared witless resemble.

 

Ode to love borne in brief flight of fancy

Like an unfinished poem, still be artsy.

Reviews

[Belle]

A graceful waltz of fleeting desire,
This ode sings love in trembling lyre—
Ephemeral, bright, and shyly bold,
A dream half-caught, in verses told.

[Belle]

It’s been 12 years since I first encountered your work here, and I deeply admire the consistency in your writing—the clarity, the voice, the rhythm. It’s rare to witness such sustained craftsmanship over time.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! It is so good to see you again; I missed my good ol' friend.
Thank you for the visit and continued support and confidence. See you soon.

[emmajoygreen]

Seems Easter is a time for a generosity of genuine friendship: the words scattered through the Cafe are really meant to be shared and savoured.

'Ode to love borne in brief flight of fancy
Like an unfinished poem, still be artsy.'

There is poetry, lyrics and a modern-day prayer in your poem, for me - especially the above, Sami. Many thanks for sharing such a gentle and well honed sonnet. it could and should be your genre

[Sami Khalil]

OMG! Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and blessings with us.
Much obliged!
read moreOMG! Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and blessings with us.
Much obliged!

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I love the encouraging tone of this sonnet and the wording. Brilliant work and very much enjoyed! And that illustration...my daughter (the real artist in our family) drew almost an identical swan in flight when she was 7 or 8. I wish I could share it here for comparison. I think she drew hers from an illustration in a Hans Christian Anderson Fairytales book. Anyway, love the poem, great work. F.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! I admire that and her talent; she takes after her father albeit in different field. I wish you can write a poem and include that.
I just thought it looks marvelous.
Have you seen MCS drawings on this site. Show them to your daughter.
Thank you so much for your thoughts and blessings with us.

[Sami Khalil]

A day dream, a night dream, a vision; perhaps all of the above.

[redd Brick Keshner]

Now here’s the safe place to be artsy. Not many environments would allow for it🕊🙏🏻

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! So true and well articulated. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and blessings with us. Safety and fun.

[redd Brick Keshner]

Most welcome dear Sami🕊🙏🏻

[Sami Khalil]

Yes siiiirrrrr. Gracie millee.

[Betty Hermelee]

An amazing cluster of words of love, "ode to love born in brief flight of fancy"....I couldn't write like this beautiful sonnet if I tried very hard.....bravo Sami
Warmly, B

[Sami Khalil]

OMG! Thank you so much Betty for this gracious review from a highly prized poet. Things come natural as you know, then we just jot them down. Take care.

[Betty Hermelee]

Your poetry is amazing, I’m jealous!
Always a pleasure🌷
Warmly
B

[Sami Khalil]

Yours too. Much appreciated. Gracie millee.

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"Abandoned confessions burgle plethora" WHAATT! wow.
Here is my favorite poet! I can't understand how words that come side by side can create such beautiful sentences. You are the artist sir.
Last words have the potential to become tattooed on someone's body at ANY MOMENT.

[Sami Khalil]

Hehehe!
You are so kind.
Words have power as you know.
Our thinking minds and our feeling hearts respond accordingly.
Thank you so much for your support and generous visits.
See you soon.

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Hey sir, I don't review to get reviews back. Please don't feel responsible to visit my profile. Thank you so much tho. I just love your works so much🌸 Have a great week.

[MCS]

Your talent always shines through in your sonnets. I enjoy them immensely.

[Sami Khalil]

Wowzy woo!
Thank you so much MCS for this wonderful review and generous wishes. You are appreciated.

[Thomas W Case]

Tremendous work. Well crafted.

[Sami Khalil]

Howdy do! Thank you kindly for your vote of confidence and generous self-appreciation.
God bless!