Her Dark and Evil Beauty I

She was dark cloud-hearted, 

And possessed an evil sort of beauty

She had dark eyelashes, dark brows,

And, of course, dark brown eyes

Her heart had dark clouds billowing around it,

And she possessed a cat-like, feline prettiness

in the curve of her hips 

As she stood there, in the snow,

a snowball poised in her hand, 

ready to throw

As the gentle snow 

Swirled silently around us.

 

The snow silently twirled down,

out of the dark and hollow emptiness. 

Reviews

[Ankit Mahar]

Simply beautiful. Although I didn't quite got the meaning at first, but after reading the reviews, I understand how much truth is hidden in this poem. The way we feel when we look at a beautiful girl, it's all described in this poem.
All in all, I find it to be a pretty good poem.
Keep it up bro.
Peace :-)

[Samuel Pennell]

Thank you, Ankit! It is good to know that you could get the drift of the meaning. I guess a lot of my work has hidden meanings, but I think it is rewarding when you can figure it out. I appreciate the read, my friend! Bye!

[Dayran]

Hey Samuel ... I think she likes you too! Nice ...

[Samuel Pennell]

Thanks, buddy! She totally digs me. In the dark and silent snow.

[wordman]

reminds me of delilah great story

[Samuel Pennell]

Delilah from the Bible. Yes! Of course there is also the "Hey There, Delilah" Delilah.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EbJtYqBYCV8