Lo MIne Heart Descends

A Poem by Sam

Lo, mine heart descends,

Besmirched, asunder

As though struck by thunder

From whence amity and zeal once sprang unbridled

Now only despair portends.

Author's Note

Trying out the site. Tell me if I'm as good as I think I might be.

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It is indeed good. Nice job. :)

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Added on January 19, 2014
Last Updated on January 19, 2014

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