Nothingness

Down right defeated
My heart feels depleted
Im so lost i cant find my way home

Have i lived there before
I cant seem to be sure
Im so lost i cant find my way home

Black portals start forming
No fair or clear warning
I dnt know if ill find my way home

Feet parted on ground
Nothing familiar around
I fear that ive never been home

Now my world is a wreck
And feel sick to my stomach
Im drowning and wont return home

Reviews

[Roger Turgeon]

I like the progression of references to home (though the first two repeat)

What is lost, never had, and will never be is what makes us sad. ( : O (

[Samwam]

Hey Roger. Thank you for your feedback. Its only in the third stanza that i come to realization of where my mind has taken me. Places i wish to never have met. I do agree with your statement as well. Again thank you

[Sami Khalil]

We all go through stages in life and that is one relevant one to all of us. You pen with truth and honesty...Excellent...:).................

[Samwam]

I thank all for their feedback. It means a lot to me and enjoy your writes just as much:)

[vaishnavi]

your writings are very good it shows the clear feeling of your hearts

[A. Amos]

This is deep, poignant and very touchy write, sorry about whatever you been through and your emotions are very well felt. Thank you for sharing

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Sorta like a dead end road feel I know the feeling< thank you have and hold a lot of feeling within and share them I like that:)))))))))))))))))))))