Feeling Alive

I feel so alive…

After months of silence resilience and struggles,

Pushing myself in the ocean of painful moments…

Fighting against something my own

I never realized I just killed my emotional being…

For all these times I have been motionless, speechless n powerless

But this dusk got a thunderstorm of feelings about me

I feel so myself, I feel how scared I have been to myself...

So tardy to actually recognize myself…

No amount of gratitude, favors’ or items can ever replace a dear old friend..

Who once was the part of all my madness...

Now turning into savior to help me bring back myself…

I feel so light, so amazing… just like the ray of first light…

Beaming into an empty space and tearing apart haunting darkness..

I feel so alive… I feel so alive…

Reviews

[Emily]

I love how you started it!
Keep on writing!

[sansrity sinha]

thank you so much! glad that you liked it!

[Krizito]

And I pray you live every minute of being alive, for life is living and always living and never failing to live..

[CA Anurag Sharma]

No amount of gratitude, favors’ or items can ever replace a dear old friend...
Agree with you completely ...making a comeback becomes easy when you have someone to inspire you and be with you....good one

[sansrity sinha]

exactly! that is why friends are indespensable :)

[Mahi sain(Mahesh)]

how this type poem i dont understend it better,i will trying to get result of this poem but i understand your poem last lines,
really nice,
bt i will give u my next review after understand poem,
good luck and wait for my next review,
thank