Unhinge Me

People can be very self centered, this about how i feel when i think of some one like that

 

Unhinge me and let me go.

Why must I always cling, 

Why must I

Always depend on you?

I want to fly

And explore the world

That lies beyond

What I circle about you.

A world that I can

Only see from afar,

But yet not be able to experience.

I want freedom, independence.

Unhinge me,

And let me soar.

Reviews

[logmein]

Sometimes I want to scream this very thing as loud as my lungs will allow! Nice write.

[Emily B]

Let me go. Let me fly. A call for freedom and independence. I've been there. It felt just like this.

[Marie]

Nice job.

[Dezaraye]

It's like being trapped and held hostage. I feel this way with my mother. You've found the perfect words to express this feeling and situation.