Chapter 2: Silence

friends *sigh*

I look at him as I try to talk to him. No words came out I yelled as loud as I could, but he couldnt hear me. He just stared out into the ceiling. Then he said Ill be in the auditorium in one hour. I looked confused. Then I heard a bell ring as the floor quaked, I fell to the floor, Randall looked down and smiled at me. Then the next thing I saw was my friend Beth(17, Senior). She said Danny, you snored through out the whole class. I just smirked as I quickly went to a frown. I went to Academic Decathlon class. I saw all my friends.
so close yet so far...

Author's Note

still really short

Reviews

[Wandering Violet]

A shame that it ends there! What happened next?

You have some good ideas, but perhaps it might help if you could break down your paragraphs into shorter ones, and perhaps use more dialogue to move the plot along.

I like your stories and their themes, nice work!. Keep it coming.