" MAA "

happy mothers day maa...aj meri maa sirf mere sath hai paas nhi...mai janti hun wo sda mere saath rahegi...

 maa tu yaad bahot aati hai..

kabhi nahi bhaati thi mujhko 

teri baatein teri seekhein

baar baar tera samjhana

tokna....daantna..fir ye kehna

'beta seekho ye sb vrna

hoga tumhe bahot pachhtana

maan le meri baat

yaad ayega tujhko ye sab

 jb mai na hovungi saath'

MAA

Mai manungi saari baatein

phir se aake daant mujhe

dikha na chaanta maar mujhe

maa kyun mujhe satati hai....

maa tu yaad bahut aati hai

                 MAA TU YAAD BAHOT AATI HAI.

Author's Note

Meri maa ko samarpit....mai apni maa ko kabhi n bta payi...ab wo sunne ko nhi...luv u maa..sorry .

Reviews

[siddhi]

i really loved it
it is like tribute to all indian mothers
it is cent per cent true
good to hear hindi here
thankyou di


siddhi

[Urja Gokani]

Amazingly written keep it up !!

[shradha]

Wow mam its really gud nd heart touching........... 👍hats off

[sapna sagar]

thank u shrdha.............

[shradha]

My pleasure mam

[Shivam Murari]

Happy Belated Mother's Day Sapna. This is an undescribably beautiful peace. It's great to see more Indians here.

[sapna sagar]

thank u shivam....thank u so much.....

[Shivam Murari]

You're welcome. :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Maa 3 words, 1 life, infinite love and blessings for life........What a way to express love for mother hats off to you!

[Destiny Dreamer]

Awww very very sad Poetry!! I've no words to describe how beautiful You have written. Mother is really a precious gift, we don't realize till they are gone :(

[sapna sagar]

thanks....it means a lot to me.

[Destiny Dreamer]

You are always WELCOME dear friend!

[sapna sagar]

thanks............

[Rajat malik]

such me.....
heartbreaking poem......nice dedication

[sapna sagar]

heartbreaking? kyon?

[Rajat malik]

Because Time has changed everything.... I mean, now she don't scold you ever time u do a mistake n all that

[sapna sagar]

haan ab wo n hain to!..... khair na hokr b hain.....thank u aap meri bhavnao ko samajh paaye....

[Rajat malik]

You are welcome....

[sapna sagar]

bs uhi honsla bdhate rahiye mai koshish karti rahungi....

[Rajat malik]

Jaroor...Aap chinta mat kare, main hu na!!! in fact writerscafe ka itna bada parivaar to hai....

[Penny]

Apni maa me pass hons sath hona, yeh kitna zaruri hair, kitna acha ehsas hai is kavita be phir yaad dila diya. Bahot khoob.

[RANJANKUMAR DESAI]

Aap badi naseeb wali hain jo aap ko ek maa ka saccha pyar mila hain . Uski yadeiyn aap ke saath hai . Hamne to maa ka pyar bahut hi chhoti umar mein kho diya tha . Hamein na to unka chehra bhi thik se nazar aata hain na koi yaad hain na koi unka pyar . I salute your feelings towards your mother

[sapna sagar]

thank you sir....yaad n to kya .....aap maa ko yaad to kariye khud me nazar aajayegi.....maa hai to aap hain....ab maa n pr aap hai....pr aap me maa hamesha rahegi.....dil pr haath rakh kr kabhi mehsus kr k dekhiyega.....har maa ka haath us pr rehta hai.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

bhavvibhor......
maa se badhkar koi nhi.......
mai ghar se door rehta hu.....haan maa bahot yaad aati hai.....
behad khoobsurat kavita.....
bahot badhaayi!!!
maatritwa ke utsav par aako aur aapki maataji ko bahot shubhkaamnayein.
:)

[sapna sagar]

Dhanyawad pushkar.....apki shubh kamnaye main rakh leti hu...maa to ab hai nhin....kisi ki keemat ka ehsas uske jaane k baad hota hai kuch u hi samajh lo....mai apki maa ko badhai zarur dena chahti hu jinhone tum jaise kohinoor ko jnm dia ...kyonki itni sunder aatma or sanskar hain aapke paas....

[Pushkar Prabhat]

oh dukh hua jaan kar.......ajeeb hai ki duniya ki sabse khubsurat kriti ko bhi bhagwaan bula hi leta hai.....
mai aapki shubhkaamnaayein maa tak jarur pohchaunga......bahot shukriya aapka..... :D :D

[sapna sagar]

thank u pushkar mujhe lagta tha mujhe koi kyu pdhega pr jb aapne mere aagreh pr meri kavita pdhi to himmat aayi mai likhna jaari rakhu....

[Pushkar Prabhat]

mujhe bhi aisa hi lagta tha......ab bhi bahot kam log kavitaayein padhte hai.........kavita ek kavi-hridaye hi samajh sakta hai...........aap jaari rakhe likhna.....padhne waale khud dhundte huye aayenge......

[sapna sagar]

itni achchi baatein.!.....mai zarur likhti rahungi....thanks.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

mai to sachi kehta hu achi apne aap lag jaati hai......hehe....!!! :) :)

[sapna sagar]

matlab ye b talent hai aapme...

[Pushkar Prabhat]

haha.......jyaada filmein dekhna ka nateeja hai...... :D :D

[sapna sagar]

sorry ...mai to chatting karke aapko pakane hi lagi....sorry sorry

[Pushkar Prabhat]

arre nhi.......aisa nhi hai.......hindi me baatein karna bahot acha lagta hai.....aur hindi me aaj kal baatein karta kaun hai.....

[sapna sagar]

mai karti hu na hindi me baat.....or bahot karti hu ....aisa b n ki eng me n kr skti...english mujhko aati hai per hindi mujko bhati hai....koi hindi padhta hi nhin.....acha ab bs karti hu warna aap meri kavita pdhna to dur mujhe block hi kar denge ....jo mai n chahti.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

hehe nhi aisa nhi hai......mujhe bhi hindi bahot bhaati hai.....!!! :) :)

[sapna sagar]

arrrey....hindi aapko bhati hai pr mai wo hu jo shuru ho jau to jaan pe ban aati hai...

[Pushkar Prabhat]

haha......yahi dikkat mere bhi jeewan me roz aati hai!!!

[sapna sagar]

itni chhoti umr me ye dikkat? ayengi hi itni pyari baatein karoge to aisa hoga hi.....khair aise hi rehiyega or haan plz meri lekhni pr review zarur kariyega.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

hehe jarur....jarur!!! :) :)