pdaav[stages]

ek aisi stage jo sabhi ke jeevan me kabhi na kabhi ati hi hai.

jeevan ke sabhi pdaavon me 

aisa pdaav bhi aata hai

baatein yaadein ho jaati hain

yaadon ki batein hoti hain

aankho me kabhi bharte aansoo

hoton pe hasi aajati hai..........

Author's Note

aap sb plz meri kamiyan batate rahiye.

Reviews

[Penny]

Remind me of my mom.. The way you write.

[sapna sagar]

meri likhi kuch lines aapko mom ki yaad dila gayin.....mere liye bahot badi baat hai penny....thank u so much.

[Penny]

Pleasure is mine.. Always.

[Rajat malik]

Such me....it's depicting the reality.... A nice work

[sapna sagar]

thank u rajat....

[Rajat malik]

You are welcome :) sapna

[nazia]

Bohot hi accha likha hai.... itna ki jitni tareef ki jae kam hain...
BRAVO!!

[sapna sagar]

shukriya bahot bahot...........!!!!!!!!

[Maumil Mehraj]

"baatein yaadein ho jaati hain
yaadon ki batein hoti hain" behad khoobsurat lines hain yeh!
aapne zindagi ki sachaai ko bohat artistic tareeke se bataya hai
Beautiful work!

[sapna sagar]

thank u jb aap log batate hain tbhi mehsus hota hai ki thik hi likha hoga.bahot bahot shukriya jo aapne dhyaan diya.

[sapna sagar]

mujhe khud ko n pata ki kaisa likhti hun aap log hi bta sakte hain....