KADAM

bahot dino se kuch naya likhne ka socha pr sirf socha pr ....

bahot dino ke baad aaj uthaya hai kalam,

ruki hui thi jaise aaj badhaya hai kadam,

htaya parda or jo aasmaan pe rakkhi nazar,

bdhaye apne haath maine roshni ki taraf,

do boond giri haath pe or bheeg gaya roam roam,

jhamjhamati boondo ko maine yun samet liya.......

aankh band hui or ek awaaz ayi,

ye wo awaaz thi maine kabhi suni hi na thi,

                    or mann ye keh raha tha,

haath bdha likh mujhe ootaar apne panno pe

uthi kalam hai to matt rok usey likhne de,

bahot dino ke baad aaj uthaya hai kalam,

ruki huyi thi jaise aaj bdhaya hai kadam.......

Author's Note

rhyme mile na mile pr aap samjh zarur sakenge....galti ho to maaf kariyega.

Reviews

[RANJANKUMAR DESAI]

Bahut dino ke baad utha Sapna ka Kadam bada acchha laga . Kutch dino yeh naam nazar nahin aaya to bahut khayal ubhar aye . Hope sab kutchh thik hoga . Naya naya likhte rahiye aur samay milne per meri short stories ke review zaroor likhe . Thanks and all the best .

[sapna sagar]

thank u sir...dont worry i m ok.....bs kuch bsy thi....thank u 4 your concern sir....

[CA Anurag Sharma]

bhut accha likha hai aapne... yeh aapki pehli poem hai jo main padh rha hun...n I am impressed by your writing skills... will look forward to read more of you...

[sapna sagar]

thank u anuraag....aapko mera likha achha laga....mere liye ye baat bahot mayne rakhti hai..

[Pushkar Prabhat]

khoobsurat hai.........
kalam uthana hi kadam badhana hai..........ye kayi mayano me bahot sachi pankti hai.....
bahot badhaayi.....!!!
:)

[sapna sagar]

thank u pushkar ji .kaise hai aap?...bahot din baad hi sahi pr aapka review dekha to khushi hui.

[Rajat malik]

Aisa lag RHA hai maano khud tum mere saamne baithkar ye shabd bol rahi ho.....
Aur haan!!! mujhe nahi lagta koi bhi isme koi galtiya dundh paayega......Thanks for Sharing it:)

[sapna sagar]

mai aap sab se share karna chahti thi rajat......so kr dia...aapne jaise taarif ki...masha allah dil hi khush ho gaya.....thank u....so much.

[Rajat malik]

Aapka hamesha swagat hai :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

Amazing Poetry!!!! :-*

[Rajat malik]

Rightly so....@Dreamer

[sapna sagar]

thank u ......

[Destiny Dreamer]

Welcome! :)

[Maumil Mehraj]

Oh my! It was beautiful...Jo aapne imagery istimaal ki hai bohat badiya hai. Aur rhyme karna zaroori nahi, ye kavita aise hi bohat sachi lagti hai. Ek lekhak ke liye inspiration hai.
Maumil

[sapna sagar]

aap khud itna achha likhti hain maumil..or jab aap se taarif milti hai to mann khil uthta hai...thank u soooooo much...

[Maumil Mehraj]

Aww! Thanks you Sapna Ji