surrender

blossom slow for me,

and the world will open new.

i unfold... for you.

Reviews

[Moi]

I feel this is one of your better pieces. I relish the simplicity, and how it says exactly what it must say. And I really enjoyed the sentiment displayed.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

So sweet and romantic... there is more beauty in this short piece then and field of daisies on a bright summers day.

[Arlolee]

I LOVE YOUR HEART KARA..........BUT WHAT IF THE FLOWER DIDN'T MEET YOUR LIKEINGS?........................WHAT THEN?........WOULD YOU EVEN GIVE IT A CHANCE TO BLOSSOM OR JUST PASS IT BY?






♥-ARLO-

[Larisa Ann Howarth]

Hmmm....what a powerful write in so few words...exposing the beauty that lies within, 'unfolding' for another, opening up like a spring flower to the sun...beautiful...I Love it! I adore haiku poems and poetry that is 'blossoming' with passion, lust, love, discovery...this combines them all into one 'perfect' write..Love Larisa --

[Maxinne Marie]

Aww, this is quite sweetly composed. I love flowers, they are simply wonderful. So is your haiku. =)

[Ted]

Short, but not lacking in power.