crescendo

Has it been forever?
or merely a day?
no matter, for the unbidden emotions
are no further away.

 

You are closer to me than air
[you are in the words I speak]
I am now meek
I am so weak
for you.

 

You are dancing
upon the tastebuds
of my tongue.

 

Your song—
it has been sung

 

and I am lost…

 

somewhere within the crescendo.

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You are closer to me than air
[you are in the words I speak]

Damn now those are breathtaking words, pardon the pun... but to feel such closeness as this is the most beautiful thing and this poem is beyond words to describe how passionate it is.

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Lovely! I love music so the last lines really tugged at my heart. Great read, sweet and to the point. Kudos to you!

Bern

[Nihad Dweidary]

You are dancing
upon the taste buds
of my tongue.

You damn romantic! I am beginning to feel that you have a muse under your bed who, on command, is quick to induce in your mind amazing imagery. This was intoxicating. Whew!

Huuuugs! Big hugs!

-Nihad

[Fgghhs Bhsh]

This is an extremely romantic to me. You have lost your soul in the mere love at its strange devotion. Very miraculous metaphor in its genuine application. wonderful work!

[Gandré]

To get lost middle in the kiss that's fantastic how you said this with

"somewhere within the crescendo. "

[David P. Eckert]

Ah, new love, it's so wonderful you can taste it, sing it, breathe it in the air. A brief and deceptively simple verse, but lines like these

"You are dancing
upon the taste buds
of my tongue."

are anything but common

[Marc Mccune]

to come like this.

amazing.

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[Ted]

Another one. I almost missed it. I was spreading the word about you.