laughter-colored kisses

laughter-colored kisses
(actually shining)
like mosaic-covered candy.

 

 

my smile
will slowly
whisper against wanting—

 

 

hey, it’s good to know
i’m alive.

Reviews

[deathcabxcutiex]

I really like the lines:
"my smile
will slowly
whisper against wanting"

[Larisa Ann Howarth]

...i really love this one....short and sweet 'like mosaic-covered candy'...
colourful, delicious...adore the title 'laughter-colored kisses'...the colours you use to express your thoughts...how clever!
.you rock.

(*smiles*)

larisa --

[Laura A. Shodire]

I love the use of colored type in this, and the candy image. It reminds me of what a simple creature happiness actually is.

[Christopher G. Starling]

i liked the colors. expermenting with poetry like this is fun and it is becoming more and more popular. The poem itself was good as well. short and sweet.

[Mark]

Another awesome picture. I now know the color of laughter. :)

Haha. :)

[Randy Mckenica -writers..]

Its a pretty snippet, but those colors detract more than add to the poem. lose them and save the luxurious words.

[Kelly D.]

I love, love, love, the title! I like things like that. This whole poem is wonderful in its simplicity. It is very succinct but playful and imaginative at the same time. Love it.

[Nihad Dweidary]

"my smile
will slowly
whisper upon wanting�"

Big sigh. A poetic mind is something else, isn't it?

Love,

Nihad

[Teresa Gunn]

This is the first time I've seen someone effectively use font colour in a poem. Hats off to you!