Hearts ink

A Poem by sara

just about writing

Write the words on paper

Let the ink be your blood

Flowing through your fingertips

From your heart

To the world

© 2008 sara

Author's Note

All reviews are welcome and immensly appreciated...thanks!

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Aekmy

This is about a very good subject, but I think you could add a few more metaphors in there and make it more shiny, I guess.
You did very well! Don't get me wrong, I'm just trying to be helpful.

Toodles, Madeline

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on November 6, 2008
Last Updated on November 6, 2008

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sara

clifton, NJ

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right these mini bio things always come out awkward on my end so lets get it over with im sara, almost 17 and a highschool senior i love escaping into a good book (or even a semi good book) running .. more..