Cass

A Chapter by �Alexa�

This just tells you a bit about Cass.

At age 14 Cass has beautiful blue eyes and her hair drapes down to her waist. Cass is Asian. Cass's mom died while giving birth to Cass. Cass almost believes it's her fault, but she normally pushes it to the side before the tears come. At the age of 7 her dad was in a terrible car crash. Her dad was soon found dead. All of her grandparents were dead, all of them died long before Cass came onto the Earth.

Cass loves animals, ecspeccially horses and dreams to grow up becoming a horse trainer or a vet.

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© 2009 �Alexa�

Author's Note

Well, sorry if anything is wrong, I edited it, :) hope ya'll like it. Also click on the picture beside the title to see the whole Cass.

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Jemma

Well it seems a little short. But i don't think there is much to add. You did just tell us everything we need to know about your charter :D I would only add maybe a complication at the end of this... Like say something... like... "Now with no family, no home and no hope... 14 year old Cass must find a way to... (etc) lol yeah something like that XD

Great write. can't wait to read more :D

Ps. (I am writting a book that is along these lines also.. check it out its (Untitled - a work in progress) My main charter is named Cassidy. Its a little bit older then yours but not much. You might like it :D)

Posted 16 Years Ago

RNMURRAY

"Wrong" and "Sorry" what are these word I'm a firm believer that with a pen we are gods of our own destiny..:-)......So please write on and make no apologies

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sierra_beautiful

it's good, it just needs a little more imagery

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

�Alexa�

Like their exactly the same. Sorry it doesn't make sense.

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Wave

what do you mean by "twin baby blue eyes"?

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Hey I'm Alexa. I love music, writing, animals, reading, drawing, volleyball, tennis, ping-pong (I am the official champ! yeah! :) lol) and God. I am obsessed with using the word lol. I think Twilight.. more..