Life Changes

I walk & fall in a hole
I stand & walk as a whole

My days are screaming beyond control
My days are tasty like a sweet roll

Always behave my heart & soul
Never loose my self control

Wake up & start my day to achieve the goal
Sleep & loose consciousness after all

Born to a nice world in fall
Then die alone in a dark hole

Reviews

[armin]

Love all parts of the poem from beginning to end. Great description. Ya life sometimes is chocolaty and sometimes bitter. But real hero is always a fighter who never loose. Thanks for sharing.
Review my work too. Have a nice time writing.

[SARAH]

Thank you very much, glad you liked it. My pleasure

[armin]

Love all parts of the poem from beginning to end. Great description. Ya life sometimes is chocolaty and sometimes bitter. But real hero is always a fighter who never loose. Thanks for sharing.
Review my work too. Have a nice time writing.

[PurpleQuartz]

You captured strong emotions very well!! Beautiful writing!

[SARAH]

Thank you very much, glad you liked it :)