No Title

I count the seconds until i see you again

Our memories keep replaying over and over inside my head

 

When i look into your eyes

I am mesmorized

 

Your love is all i need

And my empty soul, it feeds

 

My lips are lonley without yours

Like ocean waves without a shore

Author's Note

its not done yet...i'm not sure what else to put

Reviews

[Comatose]

I hope you figure out what else to add to it...it has the makings of a great poem. Keep trying ^^

[Jeff Miller]

Pimpin

[Mistaken]

AWW lol I love it...if you wanted you could make it longer but its good all on its own:)

[Skyman]

whats left to add?

[A]

There's nothing more to add in my opinion.

This was short, and sweet. Overall, one of the best things I've read in the past few days. xP

[Diego]

I think it's finished. All you need is a title. Lovely poem! You say so little while saying so much. Sometimes writing a short poem is more expressive than writing a whole novel. Well done!