vampire banquet

its all a mistake

he acted as if the blood tracing my skin was a fine wine

sipping through my iv as it was a straw 

he promises me eternal life

as i die

i am fading

and time is dripping away like rain on a windshield 

im trying to hold on to something with no grip

i tried hed whisper

i echoed back

its all my fault

im sorry my vampire prince

Reviews

[Fenix Flight]

This gave me goose bumps. Very well written!!!

[Ren Grace]

ominous, I love the choice of words!

[Oswald Chesterfield Cob..]

Very dark, it almost makes someone want to cry. But I loved it, very short, but very powerful :)