Our purpose.

Diving deep in thought. wrote this over a month ago.Hope you enjoy.xxx

                                                                      Why am I here?

                                                                  What is my purpose?

                                                            These cant just be all worthless.

                                                                    Do I deserve this?

                                                            While others have been deserted.

                                                                  So many of us are disconcerted.

                                                                     What did I do to earn this?

                                                             I am keeped alive trying to find a purpose.

                                                                  Praying this isn't all worthless.

hoping one day I'll do something to deserve this.

Author's Note

Hey all! I wrote this poem a while ago and forgot about until a few weeks ago. I am not too sure if I like the way it turned out. I don't feel like I got the full my point across so I thought I'd get others opinions about it. I find it very easy to share my work here since I am anonymous on here. Thank you so much for your lovely reviews and support!xxx



PS: Please feel to give me constructive criticism.xx

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the poem. Great questions asked in the poem. I ask the questions daily. Am I worthwhile, doing the wrong things. Amazing words and thoughts. Made the reader ponder your words.
Coyote