Nursery rhymes (Wow)

my first nursery poem Wow.

Wow !!

Little flowers little flowers

How big you grow

I smelled your fragnance

And it was like wow !!

 

                                                      Hey birds hey birds

Which song you sung

I heard you singing

 And it was like wow !!

 

Butterfly butterply

Where did you go ?

I followed your footstep

And I land in wow wow wow !!

continued......

Author's Note

nope !!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to be excited by the gift of nature. I liked the hope and the drive in the words. A fun poem to read.
Coyote

[sarik]

This is very much special Coyote. I am very much glad you liked..

[Coyote Poetry]

I did and you are welcome.

[Valentine]

Even some grown ups like nursery rhymes. Valentine

[sarik]

my goodness.. much thanks Valentine..,

[Shaima'a Alhaddad]

Wow, wow, wow. My little niece must read this

[sarik]

oow,

ThanQ You so much for the honor Shaima...

love to hear weather she like or not...

[Shaima'a Alhaddad]

I'll tell you tomorrow. And I'm pretty sure she will like it.

[sarik]

hahaa

Ty Ty,

Will ping you tomorrow...surely...

[kyam]

I would want my small kids to see this to make them smile! Great writing by the way......Kyam

[sarik]

I would also love to see your kids Kyam,

very thanx for the review

[Amy R]

this is so cute!
i wanna read so more whenever you write :)
thanks for sharing :)

[sarik]

thanku very much Amy

[Amy R]

ur welcome!

[FaeryQueen]

this is cute! great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[sarik]

glad you like it hazara....

[Jesse Pruett]

I liked it, but you should either make it one topic, or bring them all together.

[sarik]

thanku for your pretty suggestion jesse
definitely will think on that ..
and thanks a lot for reviewing my poem

[Jesse Pruett]

your welcome :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Cute picture you painted there!
Keep on writing!

[sarik]

if you people will keep liking my poems then surely I will never stop writing..