Unforgiving

Festival of�"� 
earthen lamps.
Separating the grain from chaff. 

* 

Pigeons will�"� 
not be let out to fly. 
It is going to be a moonless night. 

* 

The skin has peeled off. 
Time to move on. 
The bared trees.

Reviews

[SaintdeSales]

I feel like I could chew on this for awhile. Excellent imagery. It seemed to end a bit abruptly, but then, perhaps you were going for a fade out image of bared trees. In which case, it works. Cheers!