Deadbeat

Deadbeat

To live again, I
will not come after dying for
you. Resurrection?

I ask the dust, when
did you slip from the moon
to kiss immortal?

Don't leave a cut
on the sandstone to mark
the anniversary.

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

The first stanza make me think of someone who has done everything in their power for someone and has been crushed and left without breath in the heart. Has decided they are not willing to find them once they have come back to life.

Just my humble thoughts on the first stanza alone. There is a lot of imagery poured into a piece that is shorter. Amazing details!