Silence And Stealth

Silence And Stealth

In first particles of universe,
was there a beginning?
0r ending of kiss?

Can I study you
in a small shrine of words
where gestures fail?

Into the grace of
surrender, why the flames want
to leave ashes?

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[Poetic Beauty]

Flames turned to ashes…
That is great wording and imagery. Ashes do put nutrients into the soil and help fertilize it. Plants will grow better so maybe just maybe it will helps heart grow and mature as well.