Desires and Obsession

What images desire and obsession form in my mind.

Desires and Obsession

By Toshita

 

The taste of sweet blood,

The sounds of dangerous floods.

 

The smell of your fear

With the horrible buzzing you hear.

 

A tainted love, a painful desire...

So painful it sets your soul on fire.

Author's Note

Please comment and tell me you thoughts.

Reviews

[Perfume]

There's a lot going on here. It feels like a sort compilation of all sorts of different obsessions. They initial intent seems to contradict that, but I liked it regardless.
Very barefaced and passionate. And the lines coincide in a sort of seamed way, that shouldn't work, but I found it really interesting.
Really lovely piece!

[Manda]

wow i loved this! nicely done!