If You...

If you  want to be something,
be like a TREE,
which is always.....GIVING

If you want to be something,
be like a FLOWER,
which is always........SMILING

If you want to be something,
be like a FOUNTAIN,
which is always...........CONSISTENTLY TOILING

If you want to be something,
be like a COOL BREEZE
which is always..........PLEASING and SOOTHING

If you want to be something,
be like a great FABLE
which is always..........INTERESTING

If you want to be something,
be like a STAR
which is always..............SHINING

If you want to be something,
be like SKY
which is always.............WITHOUT ENDING

If you want to be something,
be like an ANGEL from God
which is always..............FORGIVING, LOVING, and BLESSING

But yes, my friends,
if you want to be one of these,
which i had been mentioning......

you first need, to be a good
human being...
who is really essential, to
make the atmosphere
around........
serene

so make your world,
something really amazing,
by .......supplying it with great meanings.
from your surroundings.

and be the change,
you and your heart,
had always been ...dreaming..!!

Author's Note

thanks a lot for reading...!!
i will be rally grateful, if you review and rate it..!!
regards
saumya

Reviews

[annie lee]

Again your faith shines through. The analogies (I think I've chosen the right word) are precise and instantly visual -- all symbols available to everyone and thus easy to mimic the benign influences. Your use of colored text keeps the reader's eye interested. Your gentle spirituality should be bottled and distributed worldwide. The last stanzas sweep the reader up into the thrilling realization that the answer is to change, to be part of the change. Inspirational for any religion and inspirational for a free spirit.

[Shivam Murari]

Those are truly beautiful quotations with the great summing up ending.
Nice work :)

[Sami Khalil]

It is a poem filled with great positivism which can change hearts and souls . Well penned...:)

[QuietlyCrash]

Beautiful! If more people lived like this we'd have a happier existence. Great job :)
-Riley

[SyberRose]

Nicely done dear and always uplifting...Rose hugss

[Jon Roggie]

Nicely stated. I strive to be serene! Love the feeling!

[Jack...]

This is a very happy poem. It made me smile this morning. If only everyone would look at things this way, everyone would be smiling. Very nice my friend.

[Saumya]

thank you jack, for the lovely review..!!!
feeling really great that my poem made your morning, a happy and smiling morning...!!!
:)