The Inner voice..

When we live each day of

our lives,

there's something always with us,

called,

our  INNER VOICE....

Every breath we take,

in each resolutions we make,

in every decisions we take,

in everything, real or fake,

Its always with us,

to keep us safe...

in me,

in you,

and in everyone

around you,

Its that something,

which is always true..

In anger,

in pain,

in frustration,

in worry,

or even in tension,

Its that something,

which gives us strength,

and helps us, to face it

friends....

In happiness,

in achievements,

in success,

or any such great conditions,

Its that something,

which encourages us,

to go ahead with them...

No matter, how wise,

or great one becomes,but 

Its that something,

which is alive in everyone,

till our last breath,

and life,s end.....

Helping us always,

in every situation....

so, hear it friends,

as much as you can,

trust it deeply,

as deep as you can,

for if you walk with it,

hand in hand,

then living this life,

no more remains

a big confusion...

as it will guide you,

the actual way, to be

with it in all situations....

and sway you away,

from life's all unsolvable equations...

 

Author's Note

i hope you all loved reading this...
please do review and rate it...
regards,
saumya

Reviews

[Akshat♥]

The use of brown color has a great impact on the poem :)
The picture is really nice :)
I completely agree with you :)
Our thoughts make our inner voice :)
Some has bad thoughts and some has good...
we all fight with it everyday :)
You showed us real path to walk through...
Saumya oyur writing skills are increasing day by day...
am glad about that :)
Keep writing dear!!

[Saumya]

thank you for the really great review....:) and its great to knw, that my writings improving..will work more on it... thank u once again:)

[Akshat♥]

you are welcome :)

[Ravyne Hawke]

I agree, the inner voice is a guide for us and we should heed it's messages when they come. Lovely poem, saumya.

[Saumya]

thank you dear...and m really happy that this dint had any grammatical mistakes:)

[Ravyne Hawke]

You did great with the grammar..

[Saumya]

oh..are you serious? thank you dear:)

[SyberRose]

Yes the inner voice guides us like a compass guides a ship...we just have to listen to it...nicely penned dear.

[Saumya]

thank you dear:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to listen to the inner voice. Some people call the inner voice a conscious. I like the poem. Good thoughts to ponder in the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Saumya]

yes, truly said sir..
thank you for the review:)

[Prritiy]

truly said if one doesn't become deaf to the inner voice, one will lead a virtuous and peaceful life.

[Saumya]

thank you dear:)

[Prritiy]

welcome :)

[emmajoy]

That 'Inner Voice' is the most precious guide we can have in life, Saumya. You've written such an inspiring poem which people really should read and treasure. Thank you so much.

[Saumya]

thank you soo much dear for the lovely review.....
great to have the first one from you:)

[emmajoy]

My pleasure.