A Woman

Hated by some,

Loved, but respected, not by everyone.

Cared still for all,

like the roses in her life's garden

expressed not, that could offend any person.

She possessed a heart

warmer than the sun.

a love..not sensed by everyone.

She toiled, and toiled

knew, she could never be a brave man

nor, she could get anything in return.

yet smiled thoughtfully, on being nature's interesting element.

She knew not,  that the world couldn't be anything,

without her mere presence!

The flowers giggled, and nature smiled

the moon grew brighter,

when this fact it realized.

God sighed at this sight,

at women shimmering in delight

going through lots,  still showing nothing but happy & contended  expressions.

He felt proud,

and her immense & unending devotion.

He graced her tons, and hugged her tight

wished her well, Saying:

'Long live ya woman!'

may each block you touch,

dance in delight

Author's Note

Wrote this randomly on this Women's Day :)
Thank-you for stopping by, and going through the poem.
Please feel free to share your thoughts, and rate it too.

(p.s-If there's any editing required, please mail me the corrections. I feel comfortable correcting it that way. )

Happy Writing to you all :)

Sincerely,
Saumya

Reviews

[Norman 223]

After 53 years of marriage (to the same woman) I have no doubts about the qualities that you have expressed. They can be as tough, as they are caring; as dominant as they are compliant, and I wouldn't be here writing , if mothers did not exist.
Your poem has expressed all this far more gracefully than me .
Norm.

[The Purple Witch]

(applauds) As a woman, I approve of this fantastic poem!!! :D

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Beautiful and yes a women is a very special part of creation- and all shall be alright- wonderful words🌹