There's A Dawn For Dusk

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Yesterday's wound,
Is today's scar,
The future mends it all,
A wound, or a scar.
That which rusts,
Turns not to dust,
Everything, everyone,
Ought to introspect!
There's a light within,
Even in the dark,
Look deep at stars,
Remember, Recall,
Their journey,
From stardust to star?
Everything that's made,
Once, often breaks ,
Before one fine moment,
When it's perfectly made
In ways it may never,
ever had thought!
Nature makes,
And nature breaks,
Nature gives,
And nature takes,
There's an essence behind,
Those transformational breaks.
Your world may look,
At its weirdest stake,
But it'll one day,
Be at is perfectly pure,
destined state.
In the midst of storms,
That baffle your heart,
Hold a fleeting breath,
Affirm, utter in strength:
'There's a dawn for dusk,
There's a dawn for dusk,
I'll look not away,
I'll look not away,
Until this dusk,
Ignites dawn on fate's face!


Let your actions,
Speak louder than words,
Hold on, if you must,
in those days of unrest.
Just loose not hope,
At your sheerest worst.
If there's anyone,
Who can fix you scar,
If there's someone,
Who can light up the dark,
It's just you, its just you.
And no one from far.
Courage, consistence
Devotion ,dedication,
Patience, and persistent perseverance,
Is what nature's forever loves,
Your truest, purest,
unfiltered presence!
Faith, hope,
Unending dedication.
There's no such night,
Devoid of day,
You're worth the dawn,
In your dusky days.
You're worth the dawn,
In your dusky days!

Tell it to your heart,
Assure those scars,
As often, as much
as you look into those scars:
'There's a dawn for dusk,
There's a dawn for dusk."
Wait undaunted,
Till you reach the crux,
As you're worth more,
than those dreary, daunting dusks. ... Because,
There's a dawn for dusk,
There's a dawn for dusk,
That always, often,
brings the best outta best.

Author's Note

Just a thought about, how to get through the dark days/phase and step into the light of hopefulness in our life :)

All honest, reviews and suggestions, rating etc.are most welcome. Also, please don't hesitate to point out the grammatical or other error that this poem may have, but yes, please do the favour of sending me the corrections in the mail, so that it doesn't gets messed up with the reviews, or in any case I miss it.(I'll be more than grateful for this favour)
Thankyou for stopping by, and taking out your time to express your thoughts about my poem here. I really appreciate your presence and effort in putting up your honest thoughts about the poem, and taking the pain of sending me the 'modification mail' to get the poem, properly and grammatically justified too :)

Happy reading & writing fellow friends and writers!

Sincerely,
Saumya.

Reviews

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I sincerely say that I needed to read this and thank you for sharing it. There is real hope and real companionship in every line. I wanted to read most of it over and over again so that I could fully accept it in my heart. It's very easy to lose hope, or at least to hide it. I think that even in the hardest times, people keep a little hope that they don't admit to anyone or even show to themselves. and this poem felt like it reached out to that hope or shed light on it and said, "come on, you can come out, it's okay, you're safe." This poem really felt good to me. Your words are worth their weight in gold and everyone needs to hear them. After all, we all have bad days, and everyone deserves hope.
Thank you so much for sharing

[Saumya]

Thankyou so much, for sharing your magnificent words about my poem, Beren :) I felt more than honoured and reviewers like you and indeed are lo lesser than gem, truly !
I wonder, what good is a poet, or a writer without a real, honest reviewer and admirer :) without people communicating the real thought about a writing, no writer can ever know how relatable and in depth their words can be to the reader, and I really, really appreciate this virtue of you here:)
We need more people like you at WC Beren, really :)
((Hugs))💖
-Saumya.

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Oh my! You think this beautiful because your heart is so pure and beautiful. Thank you so much, it all belongs to you. I am honored to hear all of these from you🩷
Best wishes and hugs! Hope you have the best life🌸

[Saumya]

(((smiling)))
Best wishes to you, Beren!😊

[emmajoygreen]

We human beings, frail though we can be, are part of the mighty glory of Nature. But whereas growth
generally remains what it should - as you've mentioned, us walking-talking people try to adopt layers that can often do more harm than good. There's deep thought to your words, plus, I sense a deep respect for what humans forget: natural creation. Fine words.

[Art Sun]

nice work on this poem...

[Saumya]

Thankyou....

[Fabian G. Franklin]

"The sun, also, rises." We must look forward to the dawn, indeed. I enjoyed reading this. Good work. F.

[Relic]

Favorite lines....If there's someone,
Who can light up the dark,
It's just you, its just you.

Belief is what keeps us going, or what makes us give up. Your words are positive and uplifting. They're the kind of words many who face insurmountable challanges need in this world today.

Excellent poem.

[Saumya]

Thankyou Relic!
Glad you liked the poem so much.
Thankyou for mentioning your favourite lines from it too :)

Happy writing.

[Dara]

Very lovely, uplifting and filled with hope for better days. I love the image the title implies and its message of positivity. Well done!

[Saumya]

Thankyou Dara 😊
Glad you liked the poem.

[Pete]

an introspective, philosophical write. i like how you draw on nature to illustrate your points. a clever reminder that we can embrace new beginnings even at seeming ends. hope and faith get us through the dark times. thought provoking and much enjoyed. well said.

[Saumya]

Thankyou for sharing your thoughtful words about my poem, Pete.Glad you liked the poem.

read moreThankyou for sharing your thoughtful words about my poem, Pete.Glad you liked the poem.

[AKSHAYAVATA GUPTA]

Nice read. What starts has to end

[Saumya]

Thanks Akshayavata :)
Glad you liked the poem