What�s the excitement of sex via mouse clicks?

A Poem by savesthedaynj

This is a revision on "Instanttextual Gratification".

You asked it so
bluntly I was thrown
from my seat
in front of the tv.

I dropped the controller.

I know it said TJbball26
was typing for ten
minutes but I could
not get the words to come
out of my fingers.

I shook my
hands above my
head for at least two
minutes.

I grabbed a glass
of OJ. Checked
the messages on my
phone and still

I knew I lost the controller.

I sat back down to
the harsh curve of the
question mark and blinking
cursor but still the
answer alluded me.

So I finally typed “I
love you” then
deleted it cause I knew
I didn’t need to say it.

You found the controller.

© 2008 savesthedaynj

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Wildecat

Whoa is this doesn't get ones attention don't know what will ,a very well written poem.

Posted 16 Years Ago

deathcabxcutiex

favorite lines:
I shook my
hands above my
head for at least two
minutes.

so.... you. i love the way you write, He-he-he-heeenaaaay.

Posted 16 Years Ago

Kara Emily Krantz

hahahahaha

i dont know if i followed it completely

but there was something about it i LOVED

i'll have to read it again when I'm awake :)

but

Posted 17 Years Ago

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Added on June 1, 2008

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savesthedaynj

NJ

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I am -an NJ college kid -a music aficionado -a movie nerd -a radio DJ -the world's WORST guitarist -an obsessive Post-it user (highlighters too) -a "collager" -a recreational photographer -.. more..