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When

I looked at him I used to feel full

I thought about him my heart used to flutter

I talked to him I would barely get the words out

 

Now

I look at him I resent him for life

I think about him my thoughts are violent

I talk to him I have trouble keeping profanity in

 

 

 

Reviews

[Ian]

Short and straight.
Feelings very well expressed.
Lots of emotion in a short writing.
Good write!

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I like this it's short and to the point well stated, and well written.

[JudyC]

I like this. You used clear, concise, frank language well in this poem. It is not easy to write a good poem in few words. I like the contrast between these two lines: "I talked to him I could barely get the words out", and "I talk to him I have trouble keeping keeping profanity in." Well done.

[MissRed]

Short, sweet and to the point. That describes every "relationship gone bad" in only 8 lines! Sad but true. Thanks for sharing.