Dawn

The eastern horizon is slowly becoming more clear

as the sun is rising I realize it's always been there

 

The sun is coming up blinding my eyes

with a light so bright with hope

 

The western horizon is forgotten once again

untill the night robs the day once more

 

The lights on the houses switch off

as darkness surrenders

 

The sound of the morning is just as it should be

crisp, cool, clear, and concise

Author's Note

really think about this, from your own point of view, what is you take on this?

Reviews

[Ian]

It's short but I liked it anyway,
I think it's a little sad, it's really good.

Good job! ;)