Homeless

Expired

 Faceless, he could represent only two alternatives:
That he was either a conscious agent of harm,
Or that he would unknowingly harm me anyway ‘’

 

The neon sirens of shame
Gave birth to the naked boy
Who sleeps in the street?
Without any name
He is the agent of sorrow.
His fate lines were erased.
The victim of the fastest tragedy
When he wakes up in the morn
He dreams about a home
Which he will never have
He dreams of a mother
Which he will never have
He still dreams and searches
Among million dead souls
That alone mother
Might wake up
                              ------------------- Thomad Ander 

 

Author's Note

Constructive criticism will be highly appreciated. I make sure that blessing will go far beyond to all of you. This is an personal piece which have touched my soul .Please do be kind and dont be brutal

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

I could picture a young boy living in the streets...always searching for the mother he so desperately needs in his life. A metaphor for finding his true home perhaps? Deeply emotive well written words . Lydi**

[sayed Mudasir Ali]

I am so much elated by your beautiful review and this poem is based on reality and I appreciate your precious time on this piece. Much respect and love ............sayed Mudasir

[Pryde Foltz]

Wherever our physical souls may wander we are lost until with find our home. Beautiful piece.

[sayed Mudasir Ali]

I am so much elated by your beautiful review and this poem is based on reality and I appreciate your precious time on this piece. Much respect and love ............sayed Mudasir

[Laminators Dubai]

Well i can't be kind enough in front of your kindness in this piece .

Nice job.

[sayed Mudasir Ali]

I am so much elated by your beautiful review and this poem is based on reality and I appreciate your precious time on this piece. Much respect and love ............sayed Mudasir

[Laminators Dubai]

any time..............^^