Daffodils wither in diablo sauce

I will stand by your side
and hold you until the monoxide does you in.
Do you prefer the hypocracy of chloroform,
or the stark nobility of a lethal injection.

 

Stake your claim because, Jimmy's is getting cold.
One straight through the fragments of a heart I left there for posterity.
My mastery of puppets is legendary, praise worthy.
It's the show held over by popular demand,
by you my doddering fans, my victims.

 

It's strange you fear him because I'm the one pulling you under,
He's just the pig mourning Daddy's disapproval.

Reviews

[Broken Warrior]

This piece is SERIOUS!! no doubt you have a sick mind, but beautifully expressed by your unique manipulative skill on words!

[Jonhoi Vaughn]

Very abstract indeed. Short and spicy. I was left in the middle of a bizzare room. Perhaps I can say this is one of the best "goth" poems I've read thus far.

[Broken Warrior]

Definately a dark piece, honestly scared the black off me, but still i give ratings to the expressive techniques and slightly obscure methods of presentation, keep writing!

[Anima Inspired]

This is both deliciously done and also a conundrum of sorts... This is certainly a mysterious piece with extremely obtuse and abstract qualities...but I absolutely LOVED reading it. There are parts of this piece that just sing gloriously, and I love the depth and the things that seem to be written between the lines. I really enjoyed this...one of the best reads in a while...

[Jason Henry]

i hope its safe to say this is an abstract piece...
you getting harder and harder with those titles though dude! i don't think they wither...they just taste better lol.

this has a dark veil, but it is revealed gradually in an excellent procession by the way. another great read and write...